Broken Sphere

Broken Sphere

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This story is about a girl named Mackenzie Razor, a 13 year old girl who is psychic. She has not told anyone about her true power.Mackenzie has experienced many weird things through her life. One day something unbelievable happens, strange thoughts haunt Mackenzie. Things have changed and she feels like she doesn't fit in. What happened? Read to find out more! :) ******* Credit to @RoseSpark for helping me with the cover :)
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