Phineas' Abduction

Hello there, here we are with the first chapter ever published!
Anyway, after years that I've wrote story largely inspired by the show Phineas and Ferb, I decided to post a chapter that I'm personally really proud on, now let me give you some quick infos about it.
The chapter that you are going to read is from my second book and THIS IS NOT the beginning of it, it's one of the first chapters, in terms of narrative though this it the chapter where the story really begins.

This is a fanfiction since I used Phineas from Phineas and Ferb, but since I have in mind to turn this into and actual story the character got a little influenced by my OC, the main protagonist of my stories who indeed was still inspired by Phineas, I didn't find a name to him yet, so in this case here imagine Phineas from Phineas and Ferb with some little changes.
First off, he had a tragic trauma that will be mentioned later in this chapter, still he's still a kind and naive boy like in the show even with a traumatic background. Phineas lives with Linda, who's his single mother and his adopted brother Ferb, I won't go into detail because it's really too much of a backstory. Isabella, Buford and Baljeet are still the brothers' friends, here Phineas and Ferb don't build, but they're both pretty well known for their own reasons.
A physical's characteristic: Phineas has heterochromia, which means that he has eyes of two different color: bright blue the right, vivid green the left one.

WARNINGS: this chapter contains violence, blood, exploitation, abuses and bad language, if you're a sensible person then read at your own risk. Since I'm Italian I worked really hard to translate this and maybe you'll find an use of the grammar that is not the best, still I'll be glad to have constructive comments about it and happy if you'll let me see the mistakes that I've done so I'll do better for the future.

Ps. The draw was made by me if you're wondering, made specifically for this chapter.