Intro to "one in a million stars"
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This is an introduction to a story I started writing on my 17th birthday. I have added parts to it since but it needs more work. I believe that now in the middle of a pandemic would be the perfect time to add to it but I really just want feedback first to see if this is worth continuing.
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Elizabeth Havok has just turned 17. Her planet is polluted and the government relies on the young adults to work and fight in wars with their neighboring planet Rheinland( which guess what is pollutant free). Elizabeth's planet is dying and so are her people global warming and greenhouse gasses are taking there toll. Will Elizabeth get a decent job? Will the testing on her birthday hurt? Frick Elizabeth doesn't even know where she belongs all she knows is that she has herself and for now that is all she needs.
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