the broken Commissar
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Ongoing, First published Apr 19, 2020
A Warhammer fanfic. 
The commissar looked out the window, one girl had broken his heart jet he didn't wanted to admit it. He would make her his. 
while she looked lonely out the window, why wouldn't she just meet the right one.

it's a try on Warhammer lovstory
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