Surprise
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Last published Thu, May 21, 2020
Hello everyone this is my first time writing a book so the grammar and all that won't be that good. This story is about a girl that gets kidnapped and she thought that she didn't know the person that kidnapped her but it turns out she did. WARNING: This book contains swearing, abuse, rape, and some gory bits. If you find these things disbursing I suggest you don't read this book.
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