Sal's D.I.D black out.

Well, I've had writer's block for about a month... I finally got 1 frikn idea... And this is the end result. I know, it's a bit more than a bit on the weird side, but it's all I got. I spent about 4 hours on this, at 5am, so they'res bound to be some mistakes. And, I don't know... I've been very interested in Dissociative identity disorder and Schizophrenia recently... so I put it in a Sally Face fanfiction, and I'm not the first one to do this in the Sally Face fandom, that credit goes to Resident Mass Murderer here on Wattpad, they wrote The Mind Of Sal Fisher, my favorite fanfic, 💯 recommended. tell me what you think of this in the comments, I'd love some constructive criticism just, don't judge me too hard. PS, sorry if this is a bit offencive. 😅