Hi, guys, I want to write a story and can use constructive feedback thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALSO, this is MY story do not take it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will be working on it all I can. Though I do get writers block a lot so forgive me if the parts aren't long. If it seems like the "chapter" isn't complete then it isn't!!! I just want some feedback on that part of the story!! :)All Rights Reserved