The Chaos In Her Mind
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Ramayan War happened because of Sita and Mahabharat because of Draupadi. The world blames women for destruction. But how women gifted with feelings of motherhood right from the Almighty, would have felt seeing blood stained grounds?
The first one shot is based on Draupadi of Mahabharat dealing with the chaos in her mind after losing the apple of her eye.
The second one shot describes the mental pain Draupadi must have felt that led to the decision of having a war.
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