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CRITIQUE 2020 [TEMPORARILY CLOSE]
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If you want truth, you're in the right place. But if you're not, please ayoko po ng away😌😌 Just kidding.
I've made this book to test my capability to give honest comments on different genre of stories from different authors. Like I said, this is not something to pick up a fight, I just want to give my own opinions about your story.
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