Don't. Look. Down
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Last published Thu, Apr 30, 2020
"Hi. You'r probably wondering how you got here, and why your here. That doesn't matter right now. the only thing that does is this one rule. Don't. Look. Down."
Peyton Wheeler is fourteen years old. She lives with her dad one weekend, her mom the other. She has a younger brother called Luca, and a older stepsister, Nancy. Then, there's him. Finn 'love-heart' Thomson. He's 134 pounds of senior hotness. Black curls, deep, chocolatey eyes girls want to just dive into. So when Peyton and Finn get paired together on a history trip to the local Museum, that reopened she can barely contain her excitement. Until the two get dragged into the basement of the museum, and transported into a game. Only it's not a normal game, oh no. With this game, it's a matter of life, and death....
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