Re-Writing "My Immortal" So it Makes Sense
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Last published Fri, May 8, 2020
Well, quarantine got me so bored that I finally read this "masterpiece of fiction" and I decided, fuck it, I'm gonna re-write this pile of garbage so it makes some semblance of sense.
I dont know how good this will be, but I'm gonna try my best to make it readable
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