Re-Writing "My Immortal" So it Makes Sense
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Ongoing<5 min
Huling na-publish Fri, May 8, 2020
Well, quarantine got me so bored that I finally read this "masterpiece of fiction" and I decided, fuck it, I'm gonna re-write this pile of garbage so it makes some semblance of sense.
I dont know how good this will be, but I'm gonna try my best to make it readable
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𝐈𝐭 𝐢𝐬 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝟔𝐭𝐡 𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐫 𝐢𝐧 𝐇𝐨𝐠𝐰𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐬, 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐠𝐞 𝐝𝐫𝐚𝐦𝐚𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐚𝐥𝐥𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐫. 𝐘𝐨𝐮 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲 𝐝𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐬𝐞𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐧𝐨 𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐤𝐧𝐨𝐰𝐬. 𝐖𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐃𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐨 𝐌𝐚𝐥𝐟𝐨𝐲 𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐝𝐬 𝐨𝐮𝐭 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐫 𝐝𝐚𝐫𝐤 𝐬𝐞𝐜𝐫𝐞𝐭? 𝐖𝐚𝐫𝐧𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬: 𝐒𝐞𝐥𝐟 𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐦, 𝐀𝐛𝐮𝐬𝐞 𝐈 𝐝𝐨𝐧𝐭 𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐚𝐧𝐲 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐜𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐚𝐜𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐬 𝐛𝐞𝐬𝐢𝐝𝐞𝐬: 𝐈𝐯𝐲 𝐃𝐨𝐱𝐨𝐧, 𝐁𝐞𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐭𝐭 𝐃𝐨𝐱𝐨𝐧, 𝐄𝐦𝐛𝐞𝐫 𝐃𝐨𝐱𝐨𝐧, 𝐀𝐧𝐝𝐫𝐞𝐰 𝐃𝐨𝐱𝐨𝐧, 𝐁𝐞𝐱𝐥𝐞𝐲 𝐑𝐨𝐛𝐞𝐫𝐭𝐬, 𝐊𝐚𝐭𝐞𝐥𝐲𝐧 𝐉𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐬, 𝐍𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐒𝐨𝐥𝐚𝐭𝐭𝐨, 𝐈𝐚𝐧 𝐊𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐧, 𝐊𝐚𝐲𝐝𝐞𝐧 𝐇𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐫𝐢𝐱, 𝐄𝐥𝐢𝐳𝐚𝐛𝐞𝐭𝐡 𝐇𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐫𝐢𝐱, 𝐄𝐥𝐢𝐣𝐚𝐡 𝐇𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐫𝐢𝐱, 𝐀𝐥𝐚𝐧𝐚 𝐊𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐧, 𝐉𝐞𝐫𝐞𝐦𝐲 𝐊𝐢𝐧𝐠𝐬𝐭𝐨𝐧 Also this is my first story so it is probably absolute crap :)Kumpleto
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