Serving the Commander
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  • Reads 448,763
  • Votes 9,679
  • Parts 131
  • Time 13h 26m
Complete, First published May 11, 2020
Mature
After being captured in a late night raid on the current planet you were being held as a slave, arriving on the Starkiller base soon to find out your new job will be much more intense than any before. Quickly figuring out the strong connection you have with your new boss will evolve into something you had never imagined possible, where will this new life lead you? 

Each chapter is roughly a thousand words long I know it seems like a very long fanfic, I do hope you'll enjoy it enough to finish it. I wish I had combined the chapters into 2k words so I'd have more like 50 instead of 100 but I don't want to delete all of the comments and stars I've gotten. Thank you in advance if you stick through until the end :) 

*Disclaimer I do not own the cover photo nor the Star Wars character's or its original content. 18+ only, scenes of sex, violence, and strong language ahead. This is a slow burn, heavy smut, very frequent nsfw scenes fanfic.* 

I am not following the movie plot closely, I am by no means a star wars expert. This is my first ever fanfiction please be easy but all feedback is welcomed. I love reading everyone's comments! enjoy :)! 

Also if you would like some visuals I upload promo videos to tik tok under theblairewitch_  I've made a Spotify playlist that reminds me of Kylo called Daddy Ren by Blaire 
Fic aesthetic photos posted to my Instagram https://instagram.com/theblairewitch_
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