Smash into you

This is my first book. It is unedited so it will have errors. I've published the first two chapters with hopes to get feedback. That will help me determine if I should continue writing.

ENJOY! 😉

Rayelle wasn't you average 22 year old college student. On the outside she was beautiful. Standing at 5' 6" around 160 lb, she was curvy in all the right places with a dark brown natural twist out. Her skin was lightly kissed by the sun with brown eyes to match. Her intelligence matched her sweet voice and her smile was truly one of a kind. People normally look to her for answers and advice, so naturally she was studying to be a therapist. Her warm and inviting personality made it easy for her to adapt and meet new people, but little does she know ... she was the missing link to a world unknown ... unknown to her any way.

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Meet Benjamin. 33 year old prince of the Pitch Grey pack. The man resembles a Greek God. With a height of 6'6" and 230 lb ALL MUSELS AND BROWN SKIN. When I say brown , I mean like milk chocolate... the kind of milk chocolate on a fondue table. When he smiles all you'd see is purely-white teeth. He was mysterious yet straight forward and transparent. He's the type of person who makes it clear how he feel both good and bad. And with all of that.. it was his eyes that made him stand out. They were grey. Like a stormy brewing ... sometimes they'd got pitch black, but we'll get to that later. Benjamin was next in line for the title of king. But being King of a pack has many responsibilities and it requires a certain degree of internal power. Such a power is only granted once the prince finds his one and only... Soulmate. This may seem strange to a regular human.. but they are much more then just human..