The Building

The Building

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In a somewhat dystopian future, where humanity has been ravaged by monsters and any human life is either hanging on by a thread in a settlement, or inside a giant building, never to see the light of day again, a boy wakes up with no memories. He's taken to a place in a big underground building, full of people like him. He meets some friends, maybe a rival, but he feels trapped. He yearns for a day where he can explore the world, and he finds the job that will be perfect for him, but there's a catch. This job is a military job, called the Wanderers, and they're not too keen on the idea of letting someone who claims to have no memories join them. Will this boy's dream become a reality? Or is he destined to rot away underground? Only time will tell the fate of this boy. *BEFORE YOU READ* Please be aware that this is technically a rough draft, and also that I'm begging for any type of critique you can find on this. I really want to improve my skill as a writer and make this story as enjoyable as I can make it, and one way to do that is to take critiques! This is also one book in a planned trilogy. I do not have an update schedule planned, but I try to write at least 300 words a day.
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