The Building

The Building

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In a somewhat dystopian future, where humanity has been ravaged by monsters and any human life is either hanging on by a thread in a settlement, or inside a giant building, never to see the light of day again, a boy wakes up with no memories. He's taken to a place in a big underground building, full of people like him. He meets some friends, maybe a rival, but he feels trapped. He yearns for a day where he can explore the world, and he finds the job that will be perfect for him, but there's a catch. This job is a military job, called the Wanderers, and they're not too keen on the idea of letting someone who claims to have no memories join them. Will this boy's dream become a reality? Or is he destined to rot away underground? Only time will tell the fate of this boy. *BEFORE YOU READ* Please be aware that this is technically a rough draft, and also that I'm begging for any type of critique you can find on this. I really want to improve my skill as a writer and make this story as enjoyable as I can make it, and one way to do that is to take critiques! This is also one book in a planned trilogy. I do not have an update schedule planned, but I try to write at least 300 words a day.
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Written by: GalaxyyGoddess |COMPLETED| This story is PG-13, and for appropriate/mature audiences. Violence, Cursing, and very dramatic scenes take place in this story. (P.S. I'm not the most amazing at stories so please don't be mean about anything. The story ended up being quite rushed and I didn't realize it until the end. And if there are spelling/editing errors, then ignore them or you can ask me to fix them if you so desire.) [NEW REWRITTEN VERSION CREATED: "Shown A New Light" Combines both first and second story together and is updated to have longer chapters] Story: Darkiplier is a strong demonic version of the popular YouTuber, Markiplier. On a night he assumes is casual, he ends up in an argument and decides to go on a walk to clear his mind. Going through a quiet neighborhood, he is surprised to hear loud booming noises that echo through the area along with strange people that shouldn't be there. Sneaking into the house he sees men coming out of, he notices a man tied up and was literally tortured to death. While he had been sneaking in he landed in what appeared to be a child's bedroom, finding out he needs to rescue a child. After saving the child he instantly grows attached but doesn't know why. And when someone else finds out about the child... He ends up in a fight that involves more than one person.

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