The Building
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Ongoing, First published May 12, 2020
In a somewhat dystopian future, where humanity has been ravaged by monsters and any human life is either hanging on by a thread in a settlement, or inside a giant building, never to see the light of day again, a boy wakes up with no memories.

He's taken to a place in a big underground building, full of people like him. He meets some friends, maybe a rival, but he feels trapped. He yearns for a day where he can explore the world, and he finds the job that will be perfect for him, but there's a catch.

This job is a military job, called the Wanderers, and they're not too keen on the idea of letting someone who claims to have no memories join them.

Will this boy's dream become a reality? Or is he destined to rot away underground?
Only time will tell the fate of this boy.


*BEFORE YOU READ* Please be aware that this is technically a rough draft, and also that I'm begging for any type of critique you can find on this. I really want to improve my skill as a writer and make this story as enjoyable as I can make it, and one way to do that is to take critiques! This is also one book in a planned trilogy. I do not have an update schedule planned, but I try to write at least 300 words a day.
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my first book (feedback appreciated, may or may not be implemented after story ends) filled with random shit (no horny) THE ITALICS DIDNT CARRY OVER AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA (neither did most the formatting, but those are the struggles of a google docs writer I guess ┐⁠(⁠ ̄⁠ヘ⁠ ̄⁠)⁠┌ Read order = publish order Publish times (story is now on indefinite hiatus) Chapters (1 - 5 months, 4k - 5k words) Dreams (3 days - 2 months, about 1.5k words) Journals (2 weeks - 3 months, about 3k words) Story summary stuff idk The MC is a boy who wakes up one day and doesn't remember anything yippee From there he starts to travel through a world, (somewhat) torn apart by disaster and looks through his home place for any clues What does he find on the way? (I don't know)