Persona 6 (WIP)

This story, called Persona 6 for now, is an idea of both @BeMyVessel and I developed.
BeMyVessel is a pretty good writer, better than me though that's not a surprise, So when this because a reality you can imagine my joy.
He is the author of "Hold Me Forever" a DDLC fan fiction That is also an Natsuki X Reader. I recommend you go and read it.
Now that I've successfully plugged in his ad here we go:

We came together to think of a whole new Persona plot and all-new characters

This chapter we both put out is actually a mock chapter, from which we hope to gather some feedback. So if you were to read it, please leave behind some feedback for us. This feedback can be as harsh as you want it to be, we'd love it if you were as honest as possible.
We're going to need lots of feedback to make this an enjoyable read.

We do all this to make sure we deliver on our writing promises.

Please keep in mind, this whole story is a work in progress, so now is the time to leave your opinions on it.

Thank you for your continued support. I hope you enjoy. ; )

[Disclaimer: we do not own anything from the Persona franchise, all we own are the characters and plot we created in this story. Thank you for understanding.]