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Ongoing33m
Last published Sun, Jul 19, 2020
You play as multiple characters all with their own goals, powers, and flaws. On your adventure you, the player, must find the clues and Easter eggs throughout each character's journey to find out the truth behind the lies. Your story takes place in the MoonFall Kingdom, home to fantasy creatures and halflings a-like. Are you a human who always felt a little different, but couldn't quite put a finger on it? One of the many kingdoms will help guide you on your path of unnatural talents! Only if they contact you of course. Within these kingdoms is where magic has found its way to almost everyone and everything. It's used in people's everyday lives from cooking, working, schooling, to even inhumane business practices! Depending on the character you play depends on what you use these mystical powers for. Do you want to stop criminals with paralyzing magic? Seduce someone into giving you all their money and possible car keys? No problem. Do you want to heal the badly injured with gentle, yet fierce water magic? Or do you want to take things by force and turn your enemies into weeping frail disgusting meat sacks, who beg for your forgiveness, trying to kiss your feet, but instead you use them to rest your feet upon? Then more dangerous magic such as fire, lightning, or maybe ice will be more to your liking. Regardless of whatever character you choose you must sit back, relax, and be forced to watch them make terrible, risky, cringe-inducing, and/or satisfying choices. This isn't a choose your own adventure now.
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NARRATOR: This is just your typical love story, but with a TWIST! Wanna know what that twist is? *Evil smirk* Well, if I told you now then...WHERE'S THE FUN IN THAT??? ****** Welcoming speech: By the school's head of council. "Welcome, all of you to this assembly. I know some of you are just starting a freshman year with us, others are old aquaintances and colleagues. However, whether or not you are 'new or old' all are welcomed into our prestiged school nation, 'SKY CROSS'! Do you think you can escape faith? Are you ready to indulge in a Rollercoaster ride of hope? If so, then join in as we explore the deepend Ocean, flowing into deeper tides that one can only but dive into, in attempts to discover new secrets. Walk a path different from the one you'd intend for yourself. Submit yourself into your new norm, because once you've done it, there's no going back. Imagine yourself beginning to read a new book. The mysteries can only be unraveled till you turn to the next page. Here! is were dreams are made into reality. Live life under your own rules. And remember, there is more to everything that meets the eye. I wish you luck on your new chapter. Let's hope you can finish the story" *Applauding* **** "I'm Nara Akimitsu... And, I've been through hell and back!" SKYCROSS! The bane of my existence!
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