Disconnected
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  • Reads 29
  • Votes 5
  • Parts 1
  • Time 9m
Ongoing, First published May 14, 2020
Sooo this was originally my entry for the 2019 Commonwealth Essay Competition that I participated in as part of school. There was a 1,500-word limit as part of the competition's rules, but I've since edited it to my liking.  It really isn't my favorite piece of work because of both the word and the topic limitations that I had to work within, so please don't expect much. That being said, hope you enjoy it :) and feel free to comment and give as much feedback and criticism as you like.
(please don't mind the cover; this is my first time designing one)
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