Smile, my love.

Smile, my love.

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First story needless to say. Ill look for a picture of the main character-her name is Kelsea(yes i do realize the similarity to chelsea) she's brunette like me and she has blue eyes like me. So she looks like me but i think everyone models a main character after themselves, only i don't have a chelsea smile. I need advice on writing techniques so i you guys have any critiques please let me know in comments!!
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Hey lovely readers! this is the first story I wrote, I hope you'll like it. Please don't hesitate to give me any feedback or any criticism, I'll appreciate it. This story is about a girl who thought she's average like anyone around her but her life changes completely when she founds out she's special, and she's the only one who can solve a very big complicated dilemma. Mainly the story contains a lot of lessons, but the most important one is... Well you'll figure it out when you finish it. P.S: English is not my first language nor the second, so no judgments.

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