My western writing piece
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MatureComplete Sat, May 16, 2020<5 mins
This is a small piece I wrote, I wrote this western to see if I could write one, I write small pieces of this kind of writing to see which genres of literature I excelled most in and which I lacked in, it's a western adventure story I titled "The Wilderness" look past the unoriginal title and would love feedback as brutally honest as ever. Hopefully it would become a full complete story soon. I am passionate about this story and really hope it does well.
It's not quite a classic western but a western in my own style. Hope you like it.
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