Secrets of the Closing Eye
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Last published Sun, Sep 6, 2020
Magic. Murder. Memories.
How far would you go to get back everything you never knew you'd lost?
Isabella enjoys her life as the Witch's apprentice in the city of Jidak, working in his shop and discovering her talent for magic. She helps the people of the city find what was once lost to them, especially when the Witch leaves on his quests. With the Witch gone once more, Isabella has to fill his shoes and muster all of her magic to help everyone, from the residents of the island to the Queen of Tresdal herself.
But one request may be more than she can do alone: Catch a murderer on the run for seven long years. With her memory only spanning four years, how is Isabella going to solve a murder she has no memory of?
But there's more to this murder than meets the eye.
A century-long curse that hangs over the Palace of Trestal and threatens to kill once more if it isn't ended.
A killer that won't rest until the curse has torn the Palace apart and who will remove any obstacle at any cost.
A choice that effects the entire island - end the curse, or regain everything you've lost.
What would you choose?
Any constructive criticism you have is welcome! I just want to improve my writing! Really hope you enjoy reading it :)
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