Chapter 1 of The Story of Jupiter

So Jupiter's powers were mostly based off of Yugo's powers in the series Wakfu.
This story as made by me and a friend who created Trax and decided on her actions in the story this is also about the mysteries of Jupiter and Trax's back story and powers. Jupiter's design was made by me i designed him as an artist and so did my friend decided on the shape and size of Trax.
Well hope you enjoy the story.
I'll try to update the story as fast as i can feel free to point out my mistakes ounce school is out i will be updating faster and have more time to fix my mistakes
Enjoy!