The comment section
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Last published Sat, Aug 1, 2020
A girl spills a deadly secret in such a simple comment section, what was thought to be anonymous, will turn into a spiral of danger, love and death for a group of girls that met, through a comment section.
This idea came from a real comment section on 'little miss perfect and her brothers' part II:chapter 13.
sooo you can go read the comment section if you want ahaha
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