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Beta-Reader for Hire!

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Reads 216
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Parts 4
Time <5 mins

My purpose as a beta-reader is to help you make your story the best it can be. Sometimes, that means giving it a quick once-over and tweaking grammar, and other times it means making comprehensive editing suggestions. I am prepared to be whatever you need, writing-wise, for your story, from a fresh set of eyes to a critique partner. I will be honest in my observations, but I will never insult you or judge the content of your story.All Rights Reserved

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