Lookism GunxFemaleReader

This is VERY MUCH a work in progress. I am not a writer. I've caught up with Lookism after rereading it for the third time and I'm starved for content. Please give me some feedback. Gun is probably my favourite character even though he isn't shown a lot. I'm open to any and all criticism, I want this story to do well.

I'm not used to Wattpad and am unaware of some of the nuances. I've tried my best to include the (YN) and what have you. I'm used to writing in first person.