Does it feel ...?
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Ongoing8m
Last published Sat, May 30, 2020
A girl named Emily Doglas stars
HAS slighty everything she ever wanted not quite all of what she wanted but she is happy with what she got , a loving mother , a caring overprotective brother who actually doesn't care about her in the same time ..
She' s lost her father in a war , well at least that what she was told .
WILL she suspect something over the time ?
WHAT about that unexpected boy living nearby , who crossed her life suddenly ?
WILL he help her reach the destination of her will to uproot the truth of her father's death ?
OR will he be the uprooted truth?
"How does it feel to be in my place ?,"
I looked at him with eyes emitting nothing but hatred digging holes in his head , rage radiates out of me to be meet with his bolt mouth-slack silhouette .
" Does it feel li-..... like hell ...?,"
I wondered what feelings have evoked him at the very moment by looking at me crashed and traumatized by his past which he hid from me or can I say my past as well .
I thought I knew him well enough to trust him with myself , but that was far from the truth .
" Cause welcome to HELL,"
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