The Racer Ranger
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I put this novel on wattpad a good few years ago and decided I wanted to re write it now I'm older and taking writing more seriously. I'm looking for people to give constructive and honest criticism to help me improve my writing ability. Without further adooo here is the new un edited drafts of The Racer Ranger.
The oceans turned and twisted with raging whirlpools. Trees cracked and groaned with the growing gusts before being swallowed by the shifting earth. Continents fused and in its center formed a dome. All of humanity and its creations, citys, technologies, down to the smallest trace were trapped within the dome. A prison. Carcere.
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Found this a draft of this shit In the depths of google docs and it was lowkey good (in my humble opinion) so I decided to revise and publish it cause why not? Who's gonna stop me? 😼 anyways enjoy to the best of your abilities and feel free to share any and all criticism because this is my first fan fiction and I want to get better at writing 👹👹👹Kumpleto
G.S/gummersleush first section
Proof of concept. Vaguely sci fi with the worms and the sky. I am a layman and have no understanding of anything. However, I am unwilling to use the proper setting for this plot. Will update soon. I have been shamed and humbled by the furry fanfic writers. Writing errors abound.Kumpleto
Blood of My Blood
A strange-looking contraption is seen rapidly falling from the sky. Its descent was calculated and precise...until it wasn't. Halfway after entering the green and blue planet's atmosphere, it started burning up, rendering some of its parts unusable. Inside this burning contraption are a bunch of...kids. These kids numbered a hundred, have ages ranging from 12 to 17. And as for why they are all strapped inside this burning 90-year-old dropship heading to the ground...Well, it all started at the end. Ninety-seven years ago, a nuclear apocalypse struck the Earth, leaving the planet simmering in radiation. But of course, the human race was a stubborn one. At the time of the bombs, twelve nations had operational space stations that they used to house survivors. Later, these twelve stations banded up and merged, becoming the one we now know as The Ark. For many years now, The Ark has kept what's left of humanity alive. But about a year ago, an engineer discovered a huge problem in the Ark's system. The Ark's life support systems are failing, and it won't be long before they run out of air and die. Hence, the current situation. These kids are being sent on a desperate mission to see if the ground is survivable again. But why kids though? Won't it be better to have the more capable scientists or guards be the ones to take this risk? The council had a lot of reasons, but the main one being: these kids were expendable, after all, they are criminals. --- This is a The 100 Fanfiction. The MC is a reincarnator. Yeah, I know. It might as well be a self-insert fic at just how much I relate my MCs to myself. Anyway... This story has been picking up dust in the corner of my WIPs. It's time to let it see the light of day. It's been so long since I started this fic, hence I will have to revisit the deepest part of my head to remember how I wanted this story to go in the first place. Updates will be few and inconsistent. 43àd à5 6974 92ñ 48ßk. //IN INDEFINITE HIATUS// :
(Old ver. Discontinued) A Dream in the Faraway Past
Feldway finally had enough. He brought out his true body, crafted by Veldanava's hands, while Rimuru was distracted, fighting an enraged Milim under Regalia dominion Rimuru was unable to contact any of his subordinates Not even Ciel could have predicted what would have happened No one knew, that in the next moments, Feldway would make the greatest mistake of his life And definitely no one knew, the suffering that Rimuru Tempest would undergo ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Disclaimer : This is the first fanfic I have ever written. So I have no idea how good or bad my writting is. This story is an old version. The rewrite is here : https://www.wattpad.com/story/339737470-a-dream-in-the-faraway-past-rewrite This is a Ciel x Rimuru story (Only true ship! Just kidding) This story has very slow pacing MASSIVE LIGHT NOVEL AND WEBNOVEL SPOILERS READ AT YOUR OWN RISK I obviously do not own Tensei shitara slime datta ken This is simply a fanfiction. Also, all of the fanfictions from which I inspired myself belong to their respective writers The original story of Tensei shitara slime datta ken belongs to Fuze-sensei Cover art : https://www.reddit.com/r/TenseiSlime/comments/xvbpoh/rimuru_and_raphael/ My discord server : https://discord.gg/XesR4HXSW8 A Discord Server in which I have a channel dedicated to my fanfic : https://discord.gg/PDsGW3QNEkKumpleto
Re: Slime-Starting Life Again as a Slime
It's been years since Yuuki was defeated and the war ended Rimuru has been left with nothing to do but endless paperwork and advancing Tempest technologically but with a blink of the eyes everything changes and Rimuru finds himself in another world as a slime (Again) This is my first time writing a Wattpad story so I'll accept all inputs good and bad don't be afraid to comment with your opinions and how you think this should go if this does well enough I will continueKumpleto
Perfected Tempest
Rimuru chooses to return to the past even if he has to erase what he already has to make a better Tempest kingdom than before. Just so he can have even more friends and loved ones then before that he lost, or was not knowledge enough at the time to help grow and become better along with himself and his nation. He also does it so he can make it so paperwork is someone else's problem but he will never say that. Little does he know that doing that gives him an even worse daily activity to deal with... Rimuruism
Tempest: The Original World
After Rimuru dies while fighting Ivarage, he gets reincarnated back on Earth. Or an alternate universe? How? What will he do with his new memories, and how will he change the world once again? A rewrite of my previous story. Maybe a few grammar errors as I am unfortunately a human Read and have fun!
Re:zero x Rimuru
Welcome to the World of Re:Zero x Rimuru! Thank you for joining! I hope you enjoy the story. To all the amazing people helping me improve, I truly appreciate it. I'm not a professional writer, but I love storytelling. There may be mistakes, so feel free to point them out so I can fix them. I tried my best to make the story understandable, but you the readers are the true judges. Of course this story contains spoilers! It has been 1M+ years, and the world has changed-just like our beloved slime. Rimuru has evolved into a being whose rage alone could erase existence itself. Tired of ruling, he decides to resign as king and explore worlds beyond Veldanava's creation. In his journey, he discovers a land filled with humans, elves, demons, and beings known as "whites." Admiring the elves, he chooses to stay there for a while. Upon entering this world, he encounters a beautiful half-elf and her companion, Puck. Will Rimuru be able to win over the elves and the girls he meets? Let's find out! DISCLAIMER! This Rimuru has a different personality-he's more playful and childish, similar to Veldora and Milim. This story also contains strong language and mature themes. (I don't own any characters or images used in this story.)Kumpleto
The Flight To Death
A plane which went missing twenty six years back has suddenly come back from nowhere. Read on to find out where it was, and what happened to the passengers in the plane. The plot focuses on a family of four who were in the plane, and the chilling experiences they have after the plane went missing, their struggles for survival in a place they don't know and lots more. Readers are the motivation for writers to give bigger and better content. I humbly request everyone who read this story to kindly share your views on the story, so that I can make the upcoming parts better. I'm sure many of you would love this, because I've put a lot of hard work into thinking various sequences in this story. Also, I'm new to writing, so suggestions about grammar are most welcome. Thank you :)Kumpleto
The Last Regret - That Time I got reincarnated as slime
Rimuru achieved everything which was possible but there is one regret he has in his mind even after the 12 years of the great war that he cant save his 'Destined One' So after 12 year he Decided to clear this regret but he don't want to change the whole timeline by directly interfering so he decided to live the whole life again after being reincarnated but this time he has every skill from the moment he reincarnated. Note: I changed rimuru personality a little bit after ch4 , I made him act like evil sometimes. The story also started to change after ch4, You would only be spoiled the events and character names of ln. Thanks @VytsuDesigns for the cover.Kumpleto
Found this a draft of this shit In the depths of google docs and it was lowkey good (in my humble opinion) so I decided to revise and publish it cause why not? Who's gonna stop me? 😼 anyways enjoy to the best of your abilities and feel free to share any and all criticism because this is my first fan fiction and I want to get better at writing 👹👹👹
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