The Racer Ranger

I put this novel on wattpad a good few years ago and decided I wanted to re write it now I'm older and taking writing more seriously. I'm looking for people to give constructive and honest criticism to help me improve my writing ability. Without further adooo here is the new un edited drafts of The Racer Ranger.

The oceans turned and twisted with raging whirlpools. Trees cracked and groaned with the growing gusts before being swallowed by the shifting earth. Continents fused and in its center formed a dome. All of humanity and its creations, citys, technologies, down to the smallest trace were trapped within the dome. A prison. Carcere.