Bittersweet
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  • Reads 218
  • Votes 25
  • Parts 1
  • Time <5 mins
Complete, First published Sep 02, 2014
This is a poem about trust and love.  Both sides of trust.  This poem is an experiment inspired by another great poet.  This is two poems in one  If you read lines one,three.five etc.  then two,four, six.  You will see.  I loved his work and thought I would give it a try.

I added a third stanza and it changed the whole poem.  This was supposed to be about trust.  How good it can be and how much it can hurt.  I have one child (25 now).  The second Stanza was about the betrayal of trust (ex husband).  I was experimenting with a new type of poem.  That is the double edge, trust so complete.
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