Beowulf: Intermediate Years

This is the Beowulf Fan Fic I had to write for my British Literature Class. The story is written to the best of my abilities to mimic the writing style of the original Epic Poem (e.g. lots of alliteration, kennings, and everything being written in lines). Also, the many uses of commas everywhere isn't me being bad at English, it is a style choice I intentionally went for to mimic the way the original way the Epic Poem sounds since I'm bad at writing meter I went for the commas to get a similar effect. The story takes place after the first half of the original story (the part where Grendel and Grendel's mother bits) but before the final battle/plot with the dragon. Thus, it is the intermate part of the title of this story. I wrote, edited, and compiled the story and concept of creatures used in this story goes the blog Goblin Punch. Please comment so I may improve my writing.