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Last published Sat, May 22, 2021
So I've found that I read on here more than I write. I love reading people's stories and seeing what you guys come up with.
If you want me to read and review your stories or have a story you think I should review then let me know in the comments. I will do my best to read as many and review as fast as I possibly can. I will read all stories though you will mainly find these throughout; Nalu/ Fairytail, Melizabeth/ Seven Deadly Sins, Amourshipping/ Pokemon (XY/ XYZ), Miraculous Ladybug.
I will read other fandoms or independent stories and review them also.
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