The Pilot's Hero

This is my first official fanfic so please comment on what i need to improve on. Oh and also there is curse words in this fanfic so if you're very innocent then don't read. Ciao.

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT, I REPEAT DO NOT OWN BHNA OR TITANFALL OR ANY OF THE PICS AND VIDS USED UNLESS I SAY OTHERWISE

Discontinued until further notice
Sorry y'all, i just have not been into writing lately. Until next time you guys!