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This is about some scenes that comes to my mind. It has nothing to do with any stories or My story that I'm currently working on. I decided to do this so we can criticize each other's work. So go ahead and criticize my work and maybe send me yours too.😊
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Verena was only eleven when she got arrested for murdering her brother's best friend. She was sent to a psychiatric hospital for what was only supposed to be six months. Now at fourteen she has been released into her eldest brother's custody to the dismay of most of her brothers. No one knows why she killed her bothers best friend but no one seemed to care. She was labeled as crazed killer and was looked at like a monster. The dark puzzle starts to come together in ways her brothers never expected. But will Verena be consumed by her demons before the dark comes to light?
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