A Walk In My Shoes-both a fictional and non-fictional love story

It's a story of love about a hot guy who turns out to be a vampire falling for a kinda awkward "chubby" girl who don't really accepts herself but have friends who do. Then this really hot guy shows up and they fall for each other. I hope I get some type of likes and be noticed like gahhh lol. Be honest and tell me if it's any good. I love criticism both good and bad. So tell me!!
Oh.....some of this is from my actual life, so yeah enjoy, guys.