日本の詩の試み Nihon no uta no kokoromi

We learned how to write simple Japanese poetry when we were in junior or primary, middle or high school. I think I have a notebook full of these nature (and sometimes not because I am a rebel and a deviant) poems. Someone told me to publish some of it. Here goes nothing...love it or hate, do I even care?

She who left read my poorly constructed poetry proudly. Left us all kaput.