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This is a narrative essay I wrote for AP English 11 and my teachers comment was that it sounded like part of a whole story and to keep it going. I personally didn't like it but you guys tell me what you think and maybe I'll expand and continue it. It's about a girl and her best friend marrying these men and them tragedy strikes and they have to make a tough decision.
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Hi guys this is my first story so obviosly it'll be not good as other j9 story. Maybe the worst but still i was determine to write it .So pleas do read it.And give the poor writer a chance to improve her writting skills. Forward. Being in arrange marriege is hard and even arder when your partner is a tottaly stranger. But the certain young boy does not care about it at all he prolly goes the flow so that his mome would let him attend the class that he realy want to attend But thats not the point. The point is what if? someone he found so annoying come to his life and change everything to what he called normal life how could he stand it? By the fact that this certain person was undiably charming and handsome. Will he ever be able to stand it at all. Well lets found out.

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