Renny
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This is a narrative essay I wrote for AP English 11 and my teachers comment was that it sounded like part of a whole story and to keep it going. I personally didn't like it but you guys tell me what you think and maybe I'll expand and continue it. It's about a girl and her best friend marrying these men and them tragedy strikes and they have to make a tough decision.
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This was never meant to be my life. My life had been decided when I was 14. But 20 years later, it was completely undecided by circumstances I had less than no control over. So at 34, I started over, hesitantly. *Note 1: Both the narrator and "He" remain unnamed. "He" is based on an actual actor (some major fantasy-fulfillment happening here), but I wanted to leave the character open to reader interpretation rather than limit the scope of the story or the reader appeal. *Note 2: For now, this is going to be more an anthology of connected one-shots that exist within the same universe; they may or may not follow chronological order. They may eventually be reorganized into novel-format, but that would be quite a way down the road.

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