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Our Power |✓
Life is not as easy as it generally looks like, it is based on love, hardships, relationships, hate and much much more interesting stuff. At some point of life we all have got those mixed feelings not knowing what to do, but haven't almost everyone around us become successful? Yes. We just need to open some locked doors in our mind to do good in life, and understand things better. ↪Highest Rank : #8 in Non-Fiction on 24/09/2017.↩ ↪First winner of The Wing Awards 2017↩ ↪First winner of The Ice Awards 2017↩ ↪Second Winner of The Purple Apple Awards 2017↩ Please do comment on the chapters and hit the star, because with your support I want 1k reads! Love you all!Complete
Cynical Souls
COMPLETED✅ Two high school teenagers finding themselves, analyzing this ever changing world, and building love. This is the type of love you wish you found in high school but probably know way too well that it only exists as fiction. Today I'm turning my fiction to reality. ❣️•••❣️ Excerpt: Just as I was about to seek shelter under some building's roof, the tires of a car come to a halt, I wonder who might pity the lonely girl walking in the rain. The passenger window rolls down, and I spot the most unexpected person seated behind the wheel. "Get in" comes out his voice, and I must've stood there agape for a few moments because next comes his rhetorical question. "Are you getting in or continuing walking in the rain?" Eyebrows raised expectantly. He sounds annoyed, like he regrets his decision to ever stop and help me. ❣️•••❣️ #5 in cynical #2 in loveandfriendship #1 in opinionated #4 in ihatelife #10 in nerdgirl #10 in HighschoolRomance #26 in GoodGirlBadBoy *contains mature themes. *contains cursing.Complete
Untouchable | ✓
˚ʚ 𝗔 𝗕𝗿𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝘀 𝗕𝗲𝘀𝘁-𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗲𝗻𝗱 𝗘𝗿𝗼𝘁𝗶𝗰 𝗥𝗼𝗺𝗮𝗻𝗰𝗲 ɞ˚ ˚୨୧⋆｡˚ ⋆ 𝗟𝗨𝗡𝗔 𝗠𝗢𝗡𝗥𝗢𝗘 a smart girl with a bright future. Luna was as pure as they come, but not so pure to the point she's never had an orgasm. Anyway, Luna was a virgin, she'd never even had a kiss before. Luna tried everything, talking to boys and trying to lose her V-card, but every-time she did - they'd treat her as if she'd had an STD. But soon, Luna realized that she was already in love with a certain boy, a boy named Milo - her brother's best friend.. 𝗠𝗜𝗟𝗢 𝗟𝗘𝗗𝗚𝗘𝗥 was an obsessive guy who would do anything for the women he loves. Milo had this friend, best friend. And it didn't take long for him to fall in love with his best friend's little sister. The moment he laid eyes on Luna, he knew he would never let her go. Although, he does hide his feelings - but he soon finds himself losing control over the walls he's built over his heart. He couldn't hide how he felt anymore, he didn't care.. ─────────────────────── Start: 4-23-23 Finished: 12-14-23 Cover ©Pinterest Untouchable ©Emelynemeeks15 ─Complete
Alone At Last (UNEDITED)
PLEASE READ DESCRIPTION! Everyone likes being alone once an a while. That feeling of peace and all your problems drifting into space melting away, 16 year old Luke soon learns that being alone is not always a pleasant feeling. When he wishes to be left alone upon a wishing well he soon discovers being alone isn't such a nice feeling. As Lukes mind slips away from reality he's losing sanity. How much longer can he take this madness?? Is he doomed too forever be this way? Take a journey with Luke as you read the story "Alone At Last" as he struggles to survive. PREVIEW INTO BOOK: ... When I shut the door behind me I realized that no cars were driving out here either. They were all empty and abandoned. As I strolled by there were no people talking in the coffee shop windows. There were no people eating in restaurants. There were no sounds except my heavy breathing and the howling wind. "HELLOOOOOOOO" I shouted, "IS ANYONE HEREEEEE HELLOOOOO!!?" I continued to call out to no one in particular feeling a little agitated by the growing silence. That's when I heard it... The winds howling came to a stop. The world seemed to stop turning. Time itself came to a halt. Leaves caught in the breeze and remained motionless. That was until the wind came calling back to me, and in this it whispered one word that answered all my questions... Alone- ---------------~~~~~ Thank you for choosing to read my story I hope you like and enjoy it!!! Please note: I am not a professional writer and I am terrible at spelling so don't judge!!!! THIS IS THE UNEDITED VERSION! THE EDITED VERSION WILL BE POSTED SOON! WARNINGS: NOTE: BOOK INCLUDES: 1.) SWEARING - & HATEFUL WORDS 2.) BULLYING - 3.) SUICIDE & MAJOR CHARACTER DEATH (also incudes thoughts and mentions of it)- 4.) BLOOD & GORE (lightly graphic)- 5.) ABUSE- 6.) And other things like that Don't say I didn't warn you!!! DONT FORGET TO VOTE !!! <3Complete
The Sea, The Stars, and Luna | ✓ The Watty's 2019
*** this was written when I was 15, you've been warned*** [1st place winner of the Rose Awards] [#2 in disease 06.25.18] [COMPLETED ✓] Sebastian had never planned to leave the mental hospital. He didn't plan on meeting a terminally ill girl and running across the country with her. He didn't plan on falling in love. Sebastian never knew how to live, he just always dreamt of it, but Luna made him realize there's more to life than just suffering. -REVIEWS- "I wanted to say I love this story so much. I love the characters and the plot and everything about it. I cried tons of times and I laughed and I felt like I was travelling with them. Thank you for writing this story, it will be one I come back to time and time again." - astroids- "Ok, I don't usually do stuff like this but I just wanna say this book was beautiful. The plot was amazing. It's just amazing how you put it together so nicely and I really appreciate how you did. The characters were unique and it was beautiful seeing each of them grow. You're amazing and this book was beautiful." - likhangdiwa The Sea, The Stars, and Luna abbymurrin © 2017 ™Complete
𝐃𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐢𝐧𝐞𝐝 𝐋𝐨𝐯𝐞
𝐁𝐎𝐎𝐊 1 𝐎𝐅 𝐃𝐄𝐒𝐓𝐈𝐍𝐄𝐃 𝐒𝐄𝐑𝐈𝐄𝐒 "𝓶𝓸𝓱𝓪𝓫𝓫𝓪𝓽 𝓱𝓪𝓲 𝓶𝓮𝓻𝓪, 𝓳𝓸 𝓽𝓾𝓶𝓼𝓮 𝓴𝓪𝓻 𝓵𝓲𝔂𝓪 𝓱𝓪𝓲" ⋆ ˚｡ ⋆୨♡୧⋆ ˚｡ ⋆˖⁺‧₊˚ ♡ ˚₊‧⁺˖ 𝑨𝒚𝒂𝒂𝒏 𝑿 𝑲𝒊𝒂𝒓𝒂 ↪Arranged Marriage ↪CEO x CEO Ayaan Kapoor, a 26 year-old self-made billionaire. He never believed in the idea of 'love' after he was mentally tormented by his past relationship. Kiara Khan, a 24 year-old self-made Fashion Designer. Always hoping to find true love since childhood but a certain incident of being stuck with her abusive partner shattered all her hopes of finding 'love' again. Two people, one unnecessary marriage tying them together. Both of them with traumatic pasts, will they be able to mend each other's broken hearts? 𝑹𝒆𝒚𝒂𝒏𝒔𝒉 𝑿 𝑨𝒍𝒊𝒚𝒂𝒉 ↪love at first sight ↪Sunshine X Sunshine It was love at first sight for him. But was it the same for her? 𝑨𝒂𝒓𝒂𝒗 𝑿 𝑨𝒂𝒓𝒐𝒉𝒊 ↪Enemies to lovers ↪Fake Dating ↪Footballer X Hacker They claimed to hate each other, and they did, but what will happen when they come to a mutual agreement to date each other for a while for their own benefits. Will the hate change into new found feelings or will they continue to hate each other? 𝐀𝐡𝐚𝐚𝐧 𝐗 𝐙𝐚𝐫𝐚 ↪Highschool Love ↪Second Chance ↪Flirty X Sunshine Two people in love since highschool. Two people scared to confess their feelings for each other. When they cross paths 6 years later, will they seize the opportunity and confess their feelings or let it go once again? Wrote this book almost 2 years ago and it's really cringe, now that i read it but it is what it is DONT JUDGE
White Crystal Butterflies | Wattys 2021 Shortlist | ✔
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Silently Falling
Highest ranking: #1 in Teen Fiction -- "Sunshine, what guy do you know has a weird fetish with sign language?" She's the aftermath of a high school party nightmare. Tragedy robbed her of her innocence and stole her voice before she had the chance to speak out. The court called her a liar, and the guilty was set free. Now memories plague her mind and trap her in solitude. She was forced to learn sign language, struggling to find a way to voice her silence. He's the definition of the boy she tried to stay away from. The epitome of harsh rumors and hopeless fantasies. The source of lies and blame. He's analyzed, misunderstood, and utterly mysterious. And he may be the one to find her voice. When they meet, she gets accustomed to his arrogance and he gets accustomed to her silence. An essay is what brings them together, but what happens when he starts asking too many questions? Will her past continue to drag her down, or will he save her? Fate has a funny way of bringing people together, but it doesn't always work how it's supposed to. *different summary inside* "Perfect amount of tragedy, humor, and romance!" -Sparkles530 "I feel like I learned a lot from your story, thank you." - 980Sarah "This book is beautifully written. Thank you for sharing it on Wattpad." -AKRathan "I just want to say that Silently Falling was one of the best books I've ever read. It's so beautiful and heartwarming and the way you described the progress of their relationship was beautiful." -Rafyrofy "Perfect ending." -TaylorxTaterxTot COVER: EnsurelComplete
Life is not as easy as it generally looks like, it is based on love, hardships, relationships, hate and much much more interesting stuff. At some point of life we all have got those mixed feelings not knowing what to do, but haven't almost everyone around us become successful? Yes. We just need to open some locked doors in our mind to do good in life, and understand things better. ↪Highest Rank : #8 in Non-Fiction on 24/09/2017.↩ ↪First winner of The Wing Awards 2017↩ ↪First winner of The Ice Awards 2017↩ ↪Second Winner of The Purple Apple Awards 2017↩ Please do comment on the chapters and hit the star, because with your support I want 1k reads! Love you all!
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