Ryota's Mission

Ryota's Mission

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About four years ago I wrote this story. Within the last year I decided to go back and read it again, and let's just say, the writing was a tad too cringe for my liking. However since I loved my storyline and my old version didn't do it justice, I had the wonderful idea of rewriting it, common for writers I guess lol. Anyways, I hope you enjoy the original and the rewrite and let me know what you think! The story clip is from the rewrite. --- I don't believe it... he's a vampire! The blood pulsing through my veins ran cold, chilling every inch of my body with it's frosty bite. I subconsciously reached towards the bullets on my side and silently cursed myself off for purposely leaving them behind. Never again, I swear, will I disbelieve the leaders or leave the camp without those darn golden bullets with me! I slowly took a step back, knowing full well that if I stay'd it would turn into a death trap. Yet, how dense can I truly be? I'm a trained soldier but... My foot snagged against a wire at my heel, every fiber in my being halted to stop. I never even had the chance to fathom what was happening when the ground beneath me disappeared, a boom rang in the distance, buts thats all. A feathery, softness enveloped my body, protecting me from the deathly results that could have been. I slowly opened my eyes, everything was blurry at first from the pressure I'd put on them moments before. As they came into focus a pair of baby blue eyes stared right at me. My feet landed safely on the ground, but nothing made sense. How did that bomb not kill me? How did I get so far from it? Who was this person that somehow rescued me?
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Moving In

Blaze White is the New Girl at the Prep school in her mothers old home town. But her only goal for senior year is to keep a low profile, no friends, no parties and NO boys. Axel may be adored and worshipped by his peer-but he hates people, except 5. So when a beautiful but closed off girl suddenly enters his group. He is not welcoming of the mysterious beauty despite the pull they both feel. •••• WARNING: This was written many moons ago. I have decided to put it back up because of a large request from readers. However, I was a kid when I wrote this so take it with a grain of salt. *** Like a deer in head lights, I freeze and watch as the car comes towards me expecting to get hit. But to my surprise, the car swerves to the side slightly next to me and comes to a stop. I take a deep breath I didn't know I was holding at the driver's side door swings open and a very pissed off Axel steps out. "Thank god," I mumble and place my hands on my knees to catch my breath. "Blaze?" He says and I hate it. I hate how he says my name as if it's his. Like he knows it's the only thing I want to hear, him calling out to me, looking at me, focused to me. It's the first time in my life I wanted someone's attention so badly I didn't care how I got it. And that was too dangerous for me to hold onto. "Are you insane or some shit? I could have killed you!" He says and starts to walk towards me. I take a big breath and step back away from him, "s-stop! Axel," I stutter still panting. It's then he notices the blood on my hands and shirt. "Is that blood?" He asks staring at my shirt and I take another step back. "Stop, stay b-back," I try to say confidently but I can't even breath right. Realizing he won't listen I start to turn around planning to make a break for it. "Don't run from me Blaze it won't go well," he growls reading my thoughts causing me to freeze in my spot. "Do not ever think you can get away from me."

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