Ryota's Mission
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About four years ago I wrote this story. Within the last year I decided to go back and read it again, and let's just say, the writing was a tad too cringe for my liking. However since I loved my storyline and my old version didn't do it justice, I had the wonderful idea of rewriting it, common for writers I guess lol. Anyways, I hope you enjoy the original and the rewrite and let me know what you think! The story clip is from the rewrite.
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I don't believe it... he's a vampire!
The blood pulsing through my veins ran cold, chilling every inch of my body with it's frosty bite. I subconsciously reached towards the bullets on my side and silently cursed myself off for purposely leaving them behind. Never again, I swear, will I disbelieve the leaders or leave the camp without those darn golden bullets with me!
I slowly took a step back, knowing full well that if I stay'd it would turn into a death trap. Yet, how dense can I truly be? I'm a trained soldier but... My foot snagged against a wire at my heel, every fiber in my being halted to stop. I never even had the chance to fathom what was happening when the ground beneath me disappeared, a boom rang in the distance, buts thats all.
A feathery, softness enveloped my body, protecting me from the deathly results that could have been. I slowly opened my eyes, everything was blurry at first from the pressure I'd put on them moments before. As they came into focus a pair of baby blue eyes stared right at me. My feet landed safely on the ground, but nothing made sense. How did that bomb not kill me? How did I get so far from it? Who was this person that somehow rescued me?
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