Underground [PREVIEW]

Underground [PREVIEW]

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The Overworld was destroyed 700 years ago and humanity has long since abandoned the surface world, fleeing into the caverns littered below, their only goal to survive the radiation slowly leaching through the soil. Subterráneo, also known as the Underground, was built as a haven from this invisible threat, the city providing all its inhabitants' needs. They recovered, building towers that penetrated the surface, and their technology advancing far beyond what it had been before. Then came the Last War. Mankind was decimated, the remnants ruled over by the cruel, merciless dictator known only as Raul. Under his tyranny, the law is enforced with ruthless violence and freedom of speech is a notion of the past. But a revolution is rising, the divided rebel cells banding together, bound by an ancient wall of carvings. Carvings promising a saviour. ------------ All rights reserved. This story is set in an underground Argentina so Spanish is frequently spoken. If you are active and speak Spanish, or are Argentinian, please PM me as I need help ensuring a) the Spanish is right (I don't trust Google translate), and b) I'm not culturally insensitive about Argentina (I don't trust Google to be accurate with cultural stuff either).
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Through thick and thin the Law shall prevail. A new sense of purpose awaits us, children of light, in the land where it all began. The darkness in which we once cowered in fear, now curbed by the might of our endless light. Come, brothers, come, sisters. Let there be peace among the wicked, just as the Law dictates. Peace and certainty is all that you have ever longed for, little angel. A bright, stable future. A roof without holes above thy head. Acknowledgement and recognition of thy existence, feverish dreams of grandeur. Greed born from yearning, treacherous vines of rapacity taint your innocent soul. You seek a future that does not exist. Let thy fingers hold the fragile line between dream and nightmare. Let thy light navigate the path. Shall thee give in and falter, O' land of old, envelop his body in thy unending flame of chaos. Spit out nothing but an empty husk, the remnants of a smile once so bright. Shall thee prevail, O', Great Kazdel, I ask of you, the impossible - take mercy on the innocent. Don't let the radiance dim and don't let the mind turn bleak. Wake, young traveler. Bid thy farewells and burn thy bridges. It's time to say goodbye, curly head. Cross post from AO3. For a shorter and more on-point description, look no further! I had something silly written up before throwing it out in exchange for that wall of text upstairs. It's a little story "about a young, dumb sankta who's been dealt a bad hand at life, looking for his place in all this mess. The pointless search for a better future leads him far, far away from home, to a country forever ravaged by war and misery - Kazdel, the promised land where devils roam free and peace feels out of place." Anyway, it's quite lengthy, but hopefully enjoyable? Slide a comment if you want, I'll give you a tiny kiss on the forehead. Man, do I love comments. (Lastly, to point out, English is not my native language, but I don't think it'll be much of an issue ;3)

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