The One True Commander [BOOK 1]
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  • Reads 67,322
  • Votes 2,039
  • Parts 30
  • Time 5h 8m
Complete, First published Jun 03, 2020
"Where are we going, mother?"
"You are going to Polis, where you will start your new life as a natblida novitiate."
I looked up into my mothers green eyes. "Are you coming too?" 
My mother swallowed hard, shedding a single tear. "No."
We came to a checkpoint where three guards were on horses, waiting. My mother hugged me tight.
"May the spirit of the commander's choose wisely." 



Y/N was born a natblida, worthy of becoming the next commander. For the first five years of your life, you lived in your village with your mother, father and brother, learning the ways of a grounder. But one day, you had to leave your village to go to Polis where you would start your new life as a natblida novitiate, training and learning the ways of the commander for the conclave. Will you win and become heda? Or will you die at the hands of another natblida?






I do not own the 100, this is just my story and I hope you enjoy :)




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