Helpful Reviews by Mumal16
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After the Hogwarts War, your parents became worried about you and decided that staying with your father was better than attending Hogwarts for another year. What awaits you in Beacon Hills, where you only spend your summer breaks? Can you achieve your goal of leading an ordinary student life and admiring your crush from afar? Will muggles notice that you're a witch? Or will they be surprised if they find out? It looks like you'll have to find out for yourself." I don't own Teen Wolf or its characters. The same goes for Harry Potter. I recommend this book to those who read all Harry Potter series or at least watched the movies. The book starts with Teen Wolf season 3. There might be some changes in the plot since it's a fanfiction. Some people may not be dead or some others may not be mentioned in this book. I'm not a native English speaker so some sentences may not be correct grammatically. If there is something you want to ask feel free. I hope you enjoy your reading and have a nice day. It's not related to the book but I'm a beginner artist at the same time. So if you want to take a look, this is my Instagram name; @saname.imaka
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