Player Wish

My first attempt on making a story here(sorry if my writing is bad, english is not my first language),
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This story is about a single man who is almost in definition of perfect man yet living deep down a solem story that he try to forget by living a life after finish his diploma studies by playing Virtual games called "Immortal Wish"..
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this game is what people called reality games wish utilize every sense on your skin,vision,hearing,taste and others. He start playing it during beta version but suddenly one day when the developer of the games die, the game also dies quietly until something happen inside the games that give uproar to the world, hence attracted more player to try on this game..
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But little did others player know that this uptoar would eventually lead to almost demise of half billion of people around the world...
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what they start as a game, comes back to them with every step they takes in this games "Immortal Wish"