A Story I Wrote When I Was 14
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A part of a short story I wrote when I was 14. Couldn't think of a title.
For context, the groom is a Marine.
The story has a bunch of grammar errors. It switches from present tense to past tense which I need to fix sometime.
Constructive criticism is welcome.
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