Scariest Day Of My Life

So this is my first story that I am writing on Wattpad. It's about a teenage girl and her experience getting sexually harassed. It's the story of hundreds of girls and I thought it would be a important story to write. I'm not a great writer so any tips would be great. I also wrote this all in one try with no revisions so it is probably not my best story that I have ever wrote.

By the way, the art is not mine. All credit goes to the artist.
https://www.pngitem.com/middle/iwRowbi_sad-girl-depression-depressed-sadness-cry-crying-sad/