Rose in the Essence(editing process and improving the story)

16 year old Ruby Charil is a rare kind of wolf that nulifies a boy's first sight--except for wolves. Unfortunately, she rejects all the boys who fell in love with her because she strives to become the next Alpha for revenge; and that is her only goal. 18 year old Gary Evans is the next head of the Evan's pack. When his mother was murdered by his Uncle, the Alpha, he swore to get revenge just like Ruby does. The rules of becoming Alpha is hard. Twelve wolves age to 16 up to 18 will battle agaisnt each other until one wins, leaving the rest dead. But when fate meets these two and blindy leads them to love and mysteries of their past lives, will they fulfill their wish to become Alpha or shall they give it up for their true love. © Copyright 2012 Charlotte Chua