Murder in the Locker Room
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Last published Sat, Oct 4, 2014
SCHOOL ESSAY
After finding her best friend murdered, a girl try's to figure out who did it... Or what did it.
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I wrote this on May 20, 2011. It was an English assignment for my freshman year final. I changed the names because I used my classmates names in the original. Other than that, I wrote this in 2 hours when I was 15, so please don't judge. Enjoy!
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