Thomas and the Magic Railroad (Rewritten)
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A lot of people in the TTTE fandom don't like Thomas and the Magic Railroad (and I completely understand why) but I love the film, so I thought it would be fun to rewrite it! I'm not very good at writing (although I'll be taking a writing class next year) so any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading!
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