Can One Keep A Secret?
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Last published Wed, May 26, 2021
The Macartle family. The infamous surname that everyone feels pitiful for in Bixard village. Maddie and Kendall Macartle, two perfect yet unlucky twin sisters. They were rich and happy, with perfect lives and boyfriends. They had that natural twin telepathy which made them feel connected. Everything was content until one day; their world's turned upside down. One dreadful day, Maddie disappeared while walking home from her friend's house and was never seen again.
Five years lapsed and she was still missing, presumed dead. Kendall was determined to get justice for her sister, trying to hunt down her killer. While trying to juggle high school and her mission to find justice side by side, she is faced with tremendous difficulties.
Anonymous death threats, lies and betrayal are now her most unwanted companions.
One secret. One killer. One target.
Will she find Maddie's killer or will she end up just like her?
Or will she end up in a web of lies that she can't escape?
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started: 19/6/2020
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