Snow
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MatureComplete Tue, Jun 16, 202020m
Sarah's world is turned upside down as she finds out her sister has been taken into hospital and placed in a coma. Everyone ignores her as she tries to finds answers. As she is trying to talk to her mother about it her sister runs into the hospital crying. Sarah only has one sister, so who is in the coma?
Hi all :) this is my short story that I entered into the common wealth writing contest. I didn't get short listed but oh well. I still think it's a pretty good short story so here you go.
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