Saving Hyrule

This is based off of the Legend of Zelda
I hope you like it, it is my first "book".
Sorry the grammar is not good.
Editing the story is not working 4 me...
Tell me your suggestions plz!!!
Also I don't know if one needs to mention this or not, but I don't own The Legend of Zelda or any of the characters from it.
I have characters I made up also.
...Zelink...
Also even thought this is solely based on Zelda Twilight Princess, it does have characters from other Zelda games in it.