Feedback is wanted!!

Feedback is wanted!!

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hey guys! Isa here! I decided I wanted to give writing a try, since all I do is read these stories... feel free to criticize me, just please be nice about it! this is the first time I'm showing how I write, even if it was just a single scene, I am a perfectionist and and i want to perfect it! having said that i only took an hour to write it so it will probably not be the best work there is. I'm still proud of it and wanted to show it off, so please! read and yell at me about mistakes! Also let me know if you want another scene or an epilogue to this one!
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Found this a draft of this shit In the depths of google docs and it was lowkey good (in my humble opinion) so I decided to revise and publish it cause why not? Who's gonna stop me? 😼 anyways enjoy to the best of your abilities and feel free to share any and all criticism because this is my first fan fiction and I want to get better at writing 👹👹👹

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