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Feedback is wanted!!

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dontrlycare4life

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hey guys! Isa here! I decided I wanted to give writing a try, since all I do is read these stories...
feel free to criticize me, just please be nice about it! this is the first time I'm showing how I write, even if it was just a single scene, I am a perfectionist and and i want to perfect it! having said that i only took an hour to write it so it will probably not be the best work there is.
 I'm still proud of it and wanted to show it off, so please! read and yell at me about mistakes!
Also let me know if you want another scene or an epilogue to this one!All Rights Reserved

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