Feedback is wanted!!
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MatureOngoing6m
Last published Fri, Aug 7, 2020
hey guys! Isa here! I decided I wanted to give writing a try, since all I do is read these stories...
feel free to criticize me, just please be nice about it! this is the first time I'm showing how I write, even if it was just a single scene, I am a perfectionist and and i want to perfect it! having said that i only took an hour to write it so it will probably not be the best work there is.
I'm still proud of it and wanted to show it off, so please! read and yell at me about mistakes!
Also let me know if you want another scene or an epilogue to this one!
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Hi there! I'm new to writing and this is the first ever story I've written. I know there are going to be a lot of mistakes since English is neither my mother tongue nor my first language. So I would appreciate it if readers give me constructive criticism rather than hating me for a few mistakes. I thank you in advance for reading my story. Now let's dive into the story. Shall we?
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