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Last published Mon, Jun 22, 2020
When a family creates a new technological advancement that allows one to rid themselves of a single basic emotion of their choice, a new empire, Garland, arises. Everyone has an ideal job and therefore a place in Garland without sadness, fear, anger, disgust, surprise, or happiness holding them back. In this riveting story, after their eighteenth birthday, two teenage twins take a test that all high school seniors go through to find their ideal place in society. However, some surprising results may set them on a path different from what they expected.
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